Feedback from Presentation

There are some problems with the blog, because of the template that is applied to it. People have not be able to leave comments so I will sort that out asap. Until then I have some feedback to post from Ian's group.

EDIT: I have now fixed the comments page.

Assessment by Vicki and Ian.

Problem Analysis:
+ A very clear understanding & design direction. Clear concept and identified audience.
- Unsure if you're using the top 10 shown or if you are choosing your own.

Contextual Understanding:
+ Identified channel and the programme that will follow the title sequence.

Research:
+ Broad research, statistical and visual.
- Slight lack of primary, besides few illustrations. The statistics on slide 2, you state fans of premier league voted, but who carried out the survey? Some of your research seems a tad young, the sticker books aimed at pre-teens, rather than 16-30, who will be wanting a different visual approach.

Design Direction:
+ You have plenty to work on and push forward. Really clear statement of intent.
- What visual style are you going for? Illustrative? Bright and graphical? What will appeal to a 30 year old male?

Comments:
• Excellent start, good research on blog, idents evident, varying styles.

In sight of this feedback, I will post a evaluation to tackle concerns raised with a view to give more clarity to my design decisions and why they are relevant.